tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7244998478912376709.post7981426403968309397..comments2013-08-21T09:30:53.300-07:00Comments on NECROPOLIS: Book: The First - Part: Two - Chapter: 5 - Installment: iiKennedy Goodkeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10308801339937940368noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7244998478912376709.post-32112838592295133572011-07-26T09:49:55.668-07:002011-07-26T09:49:55.668-07:00You are absolutely correct Lia.
It has been a very...You are absolutely correct Lia.<br />It has been a very busy month (and a bit) it has taken me this long just to get back and correct it!Kennedy Goodkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308801339937940368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7244998478912376709.post-64253785779907782122011-06-12T17:26:26.887-07:002011-06-12T17:26:26.887-07:00Just a minor correction in this paragraph..."...Just a minor correction in this paragraph..."He had clearly spoken his peace. He back away from the door staring Marcel in the eye as the Lazarus leader poured over the widening view of the vampire’s face – looking for some sign, some indication of body language that might betray its purpose."<br /><br />I believe he had spoken his piece not peace....and he backed away from the door not back away...<br /><br />I am enjoying the story so far. I am no editor by any means but i am usually good for noticing spelling corrections. <br />Lialia abbottnoreply@blogger.com